Well, I think this is pretty amazing as it is! Apart from the punctuation etc you spoke of because it is a first draft. I'd like to see this just tidied up but nothing really done to it. We can find someone open this week and you should send it off. x
Well, I think this is pretty amazing as it is! Apart from the punctuation etc you spoke of because it is a first draft. I'd like to see this just tidied up but nothing really done to it. We can find someone open this week and you should send it off. x